新托福模拟考试满分作文两篇
今年暑假我在http://toeflpractice.ets.org上做了一次新托福模拟考试，听力、阅读、写作都得了满分。下面就是这次模拟考试写作部分的.两篇满分作文，供大家交流。第一篇作文：
newfindingsinscientificareascanexamineandchallengepreviousassumptions.arecentfindingconcerningthemeerkat,aburrow-dwellinganimalintheafricangrasslands,hascastdoubtupontheconventionalideasofaltruism,thetypeofbehaviorinwhichananimalsacrificesitsowninterestsforthebenefitofanother.
meerkatswerepreviouslythoughttobeatypicalaltruisticanimal.whentheothermeerkatsfeed,thereisusuallyonemeerkatwatchingoutforpredators.thesentinelmeerkatgainsnothing,itseems,foritcanneithereatnorescapequicklyandsuccessfullyafterraisinganalarm.
however,inthenewfindings,it'sshownthatthesentinelmeerkathasalreadyeatenfoodbeforestandingguard,thuscontradictingthethoughtthatithasanemptybellywhileonthelookout.inadditiontothis,thesentinelisthefirsttoseeapredator,soitisthefirsttoescape.itisalsoplacednearestaburrow,makingitrelativelyeasiertoflee.moreover,itsalarmcallsmaycausethegroupeithertogatherortospreadrapidly,whichmayattractthepredator'sattention,providingthesentinelabetterchancetoescape.
thesameiswithsupposedhumanaltruisticbehavior.organdonationtostrangersmaybeconsideredanunselfishact,whichprovideslittlerewardtothedonator.however,bydonatinghisorgan,thedonatormaymostprobablyreceivepraiseandappreciationfromothers.isn'tthisnon-materialreward,whichincreasesone'sselfworth,satisfactorytoanyone?
第二篇作文：
doyouagreeordisagreewiththefollowingstatement?
goodteachersaremoreimportanttoachild'sdevelopmentthangoodparents.
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parentsandteachersarebothimportantpeopletoachild.somepeoplesay,'goodteachersaremoreimportanttoachild'sdevelopmentthangoodparents.'however,idonotagreewiththisstatement.
'parentsarethefirsteducatorsofachild.'indeed,whenapersonisbornintothisworld,thefirstpeopleheisincontactwitheverydayarehisparents,whereasateachercanonlycomeduringalaterstageinthechild'slife,andmayleavehimafterjustafewyears.allthroughthechild'schildhoodandpuberty,parentsexertasubtleinfluenceonhim,teachinghimwhattolookuptoandwhattobecome.
intheearlyyearsofachild'slife,hisparentsaretheonestoteachhimthebasicsoflifeandtheprincipalsofliving.theyaretheonestoteachhimhowtopronouncethefirstword,howtostandupandtakeafewsteps,howtogreetelders,andintheprocessofwhich,theygivehimthefirstglimpseoflife----howlearning,strengthofcharacterandetiquetteareessentialtooneperson.thesearewhatmyfatherandmothertaughtmewheniwastooyoungtogotoschool.
goodparentssetagoodexampleforachildtoabideby,whereasbadparentsusuallydonothavewell-behavingchildren.isn'titsaid,'likefather,likeson'?parentsarethefirstpeopleachildlearnstorespect,becausetheyarehisguardians,hiselderstiedbyblood.beingagoodparentdoesn'tnecessarilymeanthatheorshemustbeknowledgable,ormustbeabletospeakbig,wisewordsthatmaybedifficulttounderstand.ifaparentcanteachthechildhowtobehavebybehavinghimself,heisagoodparentevenifheisilliterate,orispoor.thus,achild'scharacterisusuallyshapedandmoldedbeforeheattendsschoolundertheinfluenceofhisparents,andthatismorethanagoodteachercandotothechildwiththebearingsofknowledge.
goodparentsareessentialtoachild'sdevelopmentinthattheyarethefirstevertoteachhimandthatwhattheydeliverismoreaboutlifeandspiritthanknowledge.whattheycandoismorethanwhatagoodteachercan.itsufficestosaythatgoodparentsarethemostimportantpeopletoachild'sdevelopment,andnotgoodteachers.
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